Reviewer: S Mae Kelly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2038 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Your story is an interesting concept and was something to think about. Great job in creating a new and different story. That Kwai Chang would abuse Peter and paternity was twist. Even in your other stories, its a great dynamic in how you have Peter more adult in his relationship with his father. Dealing with him man to man and pushing back. Any chance at a sequel for this? Keep up the great work