Date: Oct 09, 2023 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you. This was a wonderful story. I felt bad for Peter through the whole thing. But he made it through it all, as a hero. I would have liked to know more of what happened in the time between the drug bust and the opening of the park. Caine should have known by then that Peter wouldn't do anything with the drug money.
Date: Sep 08, 2022 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story that had me in its grip from the first paragraph. I felt so bad for our hero and thought the ending was pretty much the way he would have handled it. It would have been a nice wrinkle to have Paul show up and help Peter and setting up some conflict between Caine and Paul. Loved the twists in the story but I'll probably have to read it again to get all the details sorted out. Good read! Thank you!
Date: Aug 28, 2022 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a read. I devoted 24 hours, off and on, to finish this. It pulled me in and I couldn't let it go. I will definitely be rereading it in the future. I am still not really sure what Peter was trying to accomplish w/ Chan and I don't think there was enough closure between Caine and Peter...but everything else in this 27 chapter story was on target. For a story that did not include Paul, you managed to bring him in time and again and I really appreciate that. I would have loved to have seen him show up at the end and hold Peter the way that he needed to be held. There were some strong original characters in this.
Date: Jun 18, 2022 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why does this not have any reviews. I don't understand? I thought it was a really good story. I loved all the detail I actually love the little man in the prison. I thought it was an interesting twist to make him and the ancient know each other, that would explain Peter finding similarities in their behaviors. Given everything ;-) it had plot. It had action. It had drama to the point where I was ready to jump through the screen and seriously cane. I could not stop reading it. I felt so bad for Peter. At one point I loved all your different plot twists. I thought your take on the characters was well done. Especially Kermit, for the most part. It's an awesome story. Although I will admit that there is in you had me a little worried as I was getting down to the further parts of an I was thinking to myself all, my Lord, don't let this please like some sort of cliffhanger ending. And thank God it wasn't. Not really think you think you think you I for one like to have a decently sized Fanfiction because the smaller ones just don't have an enough detail. Thank you for taking the time to write this and share it. This one's getting to my definitely a keeper pile along with wondering if there would be a sequel of some sort. Probably not, but one can only hope because I really enjoyed this one so much.
-Lady Julanna