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Reviewer: Teprac S Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:10 am Title: Chapter 2

still reading.

Is the Doctor a thin man, fat, mussly, when she hugs him.

Keep going.

Reviewer: Teprac S Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:01 am Title: Chapter 1

This is an interesting perspective.

I was hoping for more description of the Doctor.  I'm most familiar with Dr's 1 thru 7, so I found my self looking for a clue to how this Doctor dressed, moved, spoke to give me a refference.  Leather jacket wasn't clear.  Was it biker jacket, collar up or down.  is it brown, black, tan, pink?  Is lined with fleece, side pockets, breast pockets with glasses hanging out.  Details are helpful.

Keep going, you are doing fine.

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