Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
Did they throw jack out?
Still doing good.
Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Good. Better descriptions. Keep going.
Date: Dec 10, 2022 6:58 am Title: Chapter 9
Close cropped hair! what color are his eyes?
Better!
Date: Dec 10, 2022 6:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Small details. Remind me what Peter and Caine look like. If I hadn't see the episode they could have shown up in their tighty whities for all I knew.
Did the Doctor have to reset the coordinates or did he just check them. Did picking up passesgers change things?
Am I being picky? Should I quit?
Keep going!
Date: Dec 10, 2022 6:13 am Title: Chapter 7
When she kissed the top of his head was the hair rough, curly like a sheep, silky? Brown, black, white, balding?
Doing good.
Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:54 am Title: Chapter 6
Is Caine wearing grays or yellows?
I suppose that my comments/questions aren't a "Review" sorry about that.
You are doing good sofar!
Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Still reading. (that is a good thing)
Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:37 am Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm.
Still reading.
Date: Dec 10, 2022 5:29 am Title: Chapter 3
Still reading (grin)
What is Laura Carter wearing?
Just looking for enough detail to visualize what I should be seeing.