Date: Jul 06, 2024 11:32 am Title: Heroes
Ladies: I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It had it all - Peter's relationships w/ the Blaisdells, great h/c with some tender Paul and Peter moments, excitement, a look at young academy Peter, and the young hero even realizing he had to let his body rest - not something we see a lot. I loved the interactions between Kelly and her big brother. It was a good read from start to finish.
Date: Jan 23, 2024 5:16 am Title: Independence Day
This is possibly my favourite story out of all the chapters. Poor Peter just having a misunderstanding and running with it. It definitely does reflect the older Peter and shows how the Blaisdells helped him grow without losing what he had
Date: Aug 26, 2023 10:28 am Title: Independence Day
Oh, I loved this!!!!! There were a couple of times that I could "hear" our older Peter saying the lines. You did a good job of creatiing a teen-aged Peter that embodied so much of the Peter we know and love. Poor kid! The confusion, the fear, I honestly cannot imagine what he was going through - but I felt so bad for him.
Date: Aug 20, 2023 2:34 pm Title: Brave New World
Awwww, I loved this. Such a perfect blend of Peter's fear, frustration, sweet child, all boy, and new adventure. The best mix of all. Poor Annie and Paul. Teenage boys can be very expensive!!