Date: Sep 10, 2022 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 26
Twists and turns and Peter using his Shaolin talents. You even got some Paul in there. Loved it!
Date: Aug 23, 2022 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi...do you know that there is some text missing at the first scene in the precinct? Jumps from Peter reading the newspaper, to Annie missing to a flashback. Looks like a cut and paste error.
Date: Feb 07, 2011 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story! Will there be more???
Date: Nov 14, 2010 10:17 am Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for sharing. Great stoty.
Date: Feb 23, 2007 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 26
I like this one. You have a very good wroting style and I look forward to more like this from you. Keep up the good work.