Date: Jan 04, 2023 4:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Gosh there needs to be a hanky alert at the begining! Nicely done.
Date: Jan 03, 2023 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just wonderful!
Date: Jul 12, 2022 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
How sweet! The story should be sub-titled, " Awwwwwww!" Good characterizations, good plot, good mix of dialog, action, and contemplation. I love the relationship between Peter and Annie (Chris and Janet had such great chemistry) and your story does a 'right on target' job of showing this. It was a perfect fit. Kudos!
Date: Jun 16, 2022 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
OHHHH so sweet poor peter glad he connected with Annie