Date: Jan 18, 2038 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tish: I had never read this before, so while I was formatting, I was reading. I really enjoyed it. You created some memorable original characters. To the point that I wish we knew more about them. You could easily write a sequel to this. Or, a continuation. Even your bad guys were memorable. I loved how you used all of the 101st. Each one had his/her own special moment(s) - and your two 101st heroes....very special!!!!! It made me smile. I was also very happy to see Rykker included. BTW, your Mercenaries Ball - brilliant. I just wish we'd seen a bit more before, well, stuff happened. What a cool idea! I count this as a totally successful story. Why? I regretted that it ended!!!! It's one of the best "ensemble" stories, one of the best written "ensemble" pieces that I've ever read. Good job!