Date: Apr 16, 2023 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 14
This was exactly what was needed here. Caine was...so Caine. Perfectly identifying the needs of his son. The addition of the little Shaolin made it a sweet, sweet moment. A big 'ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh' as we all take a big breath - Peter back on his path.
Date: Apr 16, 2023 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ah...now it is revealed-Benji is the Little Shaolin. I can believe it. He has his GrandPop's spirit. Poor baby. So scared. So conflicted. Peter made a good choice in taking him to Chinatown...and loved seeing it through Benji's eyes.
Date: Apr 16, 2023 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
GrandPop - always an excellent choice!!! Poor little guy. I want to adopt him. Poor big guy. I want to adopt him too!
Date: Apr 16, 2023 1:33 am Title: Chapter 11
Okay, where was the tissue warning? This was really good, very satisfying. Oh, how hard it must have been for both of them. Now, what's Benjamin up to?!?
Date: Apr 16, 2023 1:19 am Title: Chapter 10
It's so hard to see Peter and Paul at odds. So sad. Loved the hockey conversation. Gosh, I love those kids. Oh, oh, oh...Peter wants baby #3!!!
Date: Apr 16, 2023 1:13 am Title: Chapter 9
This was - so real. The entire chapter was so believable. It flowed perfectly.
Date: Apr 13, 2023 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ow! Found another cavity from all this sweetness. This was precious. Just one question...Green Goblin and Doc Ock? Who?
Date: Apr 13, 2023 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, gosh. A two tissue warning needed!!! Jessie is a good mommy, and a good wife. That had to have been so hard - to see Benji and Peter hurting so much. Sad.
Date: Apr 13, 2023 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Chapter 6:
Oh....there is so much here. I loved Peter and Benji's "guy time." Sweet. Boy, Paul sure knows how to make an entrance. I could feel what Peter was feeling. "Shock twisted into rage..." That paragraph was SO GOOD! You nailed those feelings. Can't wait for more.