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Reviewer: Quellefromage Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2022 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
Date: Aug 07, 2022 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww. Nice ending. Good work, thank you for sharing it.
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Date: Aug 07, 2022 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Date: Aug 07, 2022 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nice action. You do have Peter constantly knocking his head against wood everytime that they do the meanies to him. Just a note. OKAY!! The LAST PART!!!
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Date: Aug 07, 2022 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
Date: Aug 07, 2022 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
You've got a knack for dialogue. Got the voices down. Good on you.
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Date: Aug 07, 2022 11:57 am Title: Chapter 5
Date: Aug 07, 2022 11:57 am Title: Chapter 5
oh dear...
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Date: Aug 07, 2022 11:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Date: Aug 07, 2022 11:52 am Title: Chapter 4
NOOOO!! NOT JASON!
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Date: Aug 07, 2022 11:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Date: Aug 07, 2022 11:47 am Title: Chapter 3
OOOOOH. nicely done!
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Date: Aug 07, 2022 9:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Date: Aug 07, 2022 9:36 am Title: Chapter 2
hmmm. like the flashback. and the trading of scripture.
Reviewer: Quellefromage Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2022 9:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: Aug 07, 2022 9:30 am Title: Chapter 1
great beginning. Love the snark at the end of the chapter