Reviewer: SBerry Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2022 12:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahhhhh. Lovely. You nailed Peter's voice. You obviously got into his head when you wrote this. The line breaks and formatting were fine. 

So, did Peter move his bed? Poor fella. Nothing worse than an uncomfortable bed.

You know I'm not a "brands" fan but your take on it was...reasonable. In character. I could accept this. 

Well done!

Author's Response:

Thanks.  What is this, 100 for you?